Thursday, 11 June 2020

Gravity - Explanation Writing

In Writing we are learning how to paragraph.
I found it easy to paragraph.
I found it tricky to look at the book and then type it in my own words.
My digital learning object shows that I am practising my typing skills on my chromebook.

Have you ever wondered why you can’t float in the air?

Gravity is what stops you from flying away.

Gravity or Gravitation is a natural phenomenon by which all things with mass or energy power by pulling things to the ground.

Force is an invisible super glue, push or throw (not at people) something, left, right, up and down soon it will fall back to the ground.

Dropper popper’s are a launcher for ping pong balls. Put a ping pong ball into the dome and launch, It will fly and come back because gravity pulls it back to the earth.

3 comments:

  1. Hello my name is rusty I am a year six, and I am from kaingroa school. I think you are a very good learner, on writing and maths and all that.the thing that, you need to work on. i think you can put lots and lots more writing in because i have lot of writing and lot of people. well overn all you have done a very good job and cheerio.

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  2. Kia ora. I am Joshua from St Mary’s School.
    I really liked how are you used scientific words.
    I learnt that gravity is a natural phenomenon.
    Maybe you could tell us a bit more about gravity.
    Please visit my blog
    here

    Mā te wā
    Joshua

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  3. Hi, I am Ethan from Waikowhai Primary School. I really enjoyed reading about your explanation about gravity. What I liked about it was you added a lot of detail and it was very clear I could understand it easily. Next time you should maybe add a bit more detail about each fact. Thank you for sharing your work. Bye!

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