I found it tricky to add more adjectives and juicy verbs.
Next time I will try use a simile.
When I was little (and I still am) I used to climb trees and jump over waves but my favourite thing to do was making huts. At school we used blankets, desks and chairs. The hut was gigantic. The blanket draped over the side. Pegs clipped onto the blanket. The pegs were the code to unlock the entrance. The chairs supported the roof. it was fun doing R.E. until,
“I'm squished”
“Let’s try and make it bigger!”
“No! I like it how it is!”
It was a fantastic day.
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